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On A Clear Day You Can See Forever

Opened June 17, 1970

On A Clear Day

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PART THREE ...


Based on Alan Jay Lerner’s “2nd Revised First Draft” screenplay (dated October, 1968), Barbra Archives has reconstructed the scenes which were cut from “On A Clear Day You Can See Forever.” Still photographs of the scenes from my collection, lobby cards and even audio recordings have helped fill in the blanks, too.  The scenes are presented in the order they would have appeared in the final film.

“The preview screening at the Director’s Guild had an unscripted intermission when it was discovered ... that the print screened for review was not the final 129 min. version but a longer 143 min. answer print with four additional scenes, including a song by Nicholson and the pictures most elaborate musical production number, all of which were subsequently cut.” 

... Variety review, June 17, 1970

SCENE 146. — EXT. THE ROOF — (Cut)

After Intermission ....... We find Daisy and her stepbrother Tad (Jack Nicholson) on the roof. The entire scene was cut out of the final film, including Nicholson's song, “Who Is There Among Us Who Knows?”


DAISY

What do you think about it all, Tad?


TAD

Well, when you don’t know anything about anything, anything is possible. Why we may be living right this minute in a world filled with sights and sounds we’ve never seen or heard. We could have unnamed senses sensing unnamed things … and we could be wasting all our time searching for reasons when somewhere inside we already know the meaning. Do you know what I mean?


DAISY

No.


TAD

Sure you know it.  You just don’t know it.


SCENE 147. — EXT. NEAR THE MEDICAL SCHOOL — (Cut)

As the crowd of protestors grows around the school, Conrad and Marc have a conversation about what Pam (Marc's estranged wife) would think about the current situation. Marc reveals to Conrad that they've been separated since February. This was another cut scene in which Marc's wife was mentioned ... in the final movie, I suppose it makes Marc less of a louse for having a reincarnational affair with Daisy/Melinda.


SCENES 149.-150.— EXT. SCHOOL

BUILDING  – (Cut)

A policeman complained about the student protests to Marc. Marc helps the policeman out by telling the students that the investigation into reincarnation will continue.  “You mean it’s all over?” they ask.  Marc replies, “I’m afraid so.” And the students disperse.  Marc turns to the policeman and winks.


SCENES 155.-161.— EXT. THE ROOF – (Cut)

This scene follows Barbra’s big number, “What Did I Have” in which she emotes after finding out Dr. Chabot’s nutty patient is her. It precedes the “Get off my roof!” scene.


On the roof, Warren and Tad and the roofies were hanging out. Daisy was stretched slumped in a wicker chair, sad about discovering she is Melinda, her eyes glistening with tears. 


Back at his apartment, Dr. Chabot picked up the phone to call Daisy. Daisy, on the roof, senses his call and takes the phone off the hook to prevent him from communicating with her.


WARREN

Honey, I wish Chem Foods could see you now. Tonight, you are perfect. Quiet ... dewy-eyed ... contained ... quiet ... just the way I like you.


Muriel and McShane, suggest getting pizza downstairs at Enrico and Bernardi's. They leave Daisy alone on the roof.


Meanwhile, Marc has arrived at Daisy's apartment and passes Warren and Daisy's friends on the stairway.


Come Back

To Me

This song, as written and filmed, was reassembled in a different order in the editing room.  It plays just fine in the final film (perhaps better than was written), but you must know that the three scenes which preceded this song were originally meant to play out during it. The editor (probably wisely) has moved these scenes and kept the momentum of the song going — they really would have stopped the uptempo song cold. 


The three scenes that were moved before the song:


  1. Dr. Conrad shares his book of 19th Century psychics with Dr. Chabot. (You can even spot a subtle optical zoom after Conrad enters; probably to cover the chunk of dialogue that was removed and to match Conrad's location in the room).
  2. Daisy breaks up with Warren on the roof. “I'm Melinda.”
  3. Marc Chabot and his secretary try to reach Daisy by phone but cannot. (Note Marc's loosened tie and white shirt). Marc gets up out of his chair, heads to the window, and .... CUT!


Now we see Marc on top of the Pan Am building (in a rust-colored jacket) singing the first verse of “Come Back To Me.”

Below: The next part of “Come Back To Me” plays out as you see it in the movie ....Click the arrows to view the slides.

“Come Back To Me” continues.... After the French poodle sang in French to Daisy, there was another verse of “Come Back to Me” which was filmed and omitted. Many fans have assumed that Barbra's crazy outfit was for a futuristic sequence. However, it was for this short, omitted verse in “Come Back to Me”—literally a few seconds of film:


184A. EXT. The Zoo - Central Park. (Day).


As Daisy rushes by the cages, the animals look at her and each in turn sounds like Marc. (The cages along the walk leading to the 57th Street exit.)


LLAMA-MARC

In a diaper and pins,


YAK-MARC

In your snorkel and fins.


IBOU-MARC

Come alone or as twins.


BISON-MARC

Come back to me ... Come back to me... Come ...!

Back to the original screenplay ... there was one more scene that was omitted (because of pacing and because they cut this subplot out!). The scene was between Marc and his estranged wife, Pam. Marc spoke to her on speaker phone. She confessed to Marc, “You're the last person on earth I would have expected to find doing research in reincarnation. It's so touching ... It's so hopeful. It's exactly all the things I always said you were not.” The scene hinted at a reconciliation between the two.


Finally, in a scene which was retained for the film, Marc sang the last verse of “Come Back to Me” and psychically bothered Daisy enough to make her barge into his office yelling, “Would you stop bothering me?”

SCENES 195.— INT. MARC’S OFFICE – (Trim/Rewrite)

Dr. Chabot and Daisy's goodbye was different in the final film than in the screenplay. 


In the film, Marc asked, “Daisy, have you ever been to Virginia?” and Daisy, clueless about her future reincarnation as “Mrs. John Caswell,” said no. However, in the 2ND DRAFT screenplay, the dialogue went like this: 


MARC

Daisy, have you ever been to Virginia?


Daisy stops as something flashes through her mind.


DAISY

Doctor, do you believe that?


MARC

Yes, I do.


DAISY

I do, too.


The 1968 screenplay implied that Daisy remembered her future and was content with it, as was Marc.

On A Clear Day

The Roadshow

Finis

Would all of these deleted scenes have made Clear Day a better film? Who knows? We certainly would have seen more of Streisand as Daisy/Melinda, which is always a pleasure.


Most big film studios simply did not keep deleted footage.  In fact, in the era of On A Clear Day, several studios were selling off their costumes and props, and throwing everything else into a bonfire.


I don't think this film will ever be “restored” like Garland's A Star is Born.


But maybe .... one day .... one or more of these scenes will be uncovered.


On A Clear Day was the 13th top grossing film of 1970, earning $14 million.


Sources Used on These Pages:


  • Boston Globe, July 7, 1970, p. 30. “The Scaasi-Streisand Alliance” by Marian Christy
  • Bridgeport Post, August 9, 1969. “Streisand to Add New Song to Film” by Fred Russell.
  • Brighton Herald, May 4, 1966, p. 44. “Clear Day Show Film Rights Sold”
  • Brighton Herald, April 11, 1969, p. 4
  • Cecil Beaton: the Authorised Biography by Hugo Vickers, Weidenfeld & Nicolson, 1985. Pages 528-534.
  • Detroit Free Press, June 17, 1970. “Wrong Reel Clouds ‘Clear Day’ Preview” by Shirley Eder
  • Fort Lauderdale News, August 19, 1966. “On the Movie Lots” by Bob Freund.
  • Hartford Courant, January 25, 1970. “Nelson Riddle Scores Again”
  • Hundred or More Hidden Things: The Life and Films of Vincente Minnelli, A by Mark Griffin, Da Capo Press, 2010. Pages 282-287.
  • Los Angeles Times, December 8, 1968. “Koch Keeps Cool Head for ‘Clear Day’” by Wayne Warga
  • Los Angeles Times, January 23, 1969. “One Trailer Slightly Used” by Joyce Haber.
  • Los Angeles Times, May 29, 1969. p. D11. “Actors Re-create Royal Past With a Sumptuous Repast” by Sally K. Brass.
  • Movie News, May 1970 (Beaton interview)
  • Paramount Studios “Set Construction Daily Report,” April 26, 1969
  • Secret Life of Plants: a Fascinating Account of the Physical, Emotional, and Spiritual Relations Between Plants and Man, The, by Peter Tompkins, Harper & Row, 1989. Pages 207-208.
  • September in the Rain: The Life of Nelson Riddle, by Peter J. Levinson, Taylor Trade Publishing, 2005. Pages 230-231.
  • St. Louis Light, October 23, 1968. “Hollywood” column by Herbert Luft.
  • Streisand by Steve Schapiro & Lawrence Schiller, Taschen 2014
  • Tampa Tribune, April 16, 1969. “Celebrations Thrown for Oscar-Winning Stars” by Vernon Scott.
  • There I Go Again: How I Came to Be Mr. Feeny, John Adams, Dr. Craig, KITT, and Many Others by William Daniels, Potomac Books, 2017. p. 12
  • Times, The, December 25, 1968. “‘Clear Day’ Songs Are Recorded.”
  • UPI, February 5, 1969. “Replacement”
  • Variety, Film Reviews, June 17, 1970, page 16


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